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28 Jan, 2010 Print PDF

Captive Heart

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    She wears it

    like a cloak

    around her heart,

    padlocked in steel

    that melts red hot

    every time

     she sees him.

     The flame of passion

      resonant,

      as her voice

      echoes his name,

      the softening

       of her face

       after the open wound

        ceased to ache 

        so desperately,

         though it may never close.

         Rawness  only tempered

         the wildness of love

         subdued, unintoxicated for now.

         Revival of memories

         quicken the heart,

         carrying her

         to the precipice

         of hope

          to recreate

          the highs and lows

          of a forbidden past. 

           She writes, 

          that we may know

          her subjectivity,

          and she is safe. 

                           


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