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20 Sep, 2011 Print PDF

Hot House

smaddox, poetry editor  

just about almost done

she hums

under her breath

tenacity a matter

of circumstance

she attempts with each waking

to transform this word lost

 into something like

possibility

except for a lie

about the life span of wild orchids...

there is no room in her world-

 arms stretch long and white

over his head- she smiles 

wistful as last summer's dusk, late

and lately  sleeps in

and with  each

waking  whispers

 just a bit longer 

but almost done

murmurs always a

question of 

always a 

question of'

always a

question of

lies.  

 

 

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knackturnal
harvey gable
This work undulates...the narrator speculates then consummates, deftly inserting "the last summers dusk, late". excellent!
harvey gable , January 13, 2011
Just a pinch
harvey gable
If one were to adhere to the idea of a strong domestic undercurrent streaming within this work "but almost done" lends itself to the idea of a wood-stoved kitchen and bread rising with "tenacity" being a key element in establishing thick, brown, crust.
harvey gable , September 23, 2011
...
smaddox, poetry editor
Or, perhaps, the merely elusive scent of bread baked, and gone.
One really never knows...
smaddox, poetry editor , September 26, 2011
...
harvey gable
Yes smadd...veiled past tense would surely lead one to re-consider the degree of domesticity implied. Great to be back in the mix eh?
harvey gable , September 26, 2011
Oh yeah.
ohwellokay
Loved the murmured ending. Hot House!
ohwellokay , September 27, 2011

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