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16 Jun, 2012 Print PDF

Judgment

Mr. Nuts

Two men reflected do I see,

One in there--

the other in me.

                                     

Wrinkled, darkened, pale, shabby,

lips, hips, fingertips all flabby.

Skin a sour, hair a moist,

with kinked and crackled eyes and voice.

                                                                                   

This, I may be outwardly--

But only in mirror man

this be.

                                                              

The question is:

If I have him so

trapped and cornered,

And slow he stares,

vacantly,

What, of me, sees he?

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Great Imagery
JungleJane
Wow, you are able to use so much great imagery in such a short space. Your descriptions of the physical image in the mirror were so unique. I'm also impressed with how well you made the rhyme work.
JungleJane , June 26, 2012

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