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21 Oct, 2011 Print PDF

October 26, 2011

rickya

 

the wind blew through here tonight

like a hooker chasing a john

who hadn't paid,

and more than once,

I wished that it would have

taken me, up over the sailboat masts,

up past the church steeple,

high above the town,

filled with sleeping people;

 

only six days remain

until I commemorate,

but not celebrate,

the first anniversary

of achieving the title of

"no fixed address";

 

there's nothing like

homelessness

to teach you what matters,

to show you "what else";

 

hopes for a place to live,

once sparkled, glistened,

but now seem to be lost,

seem out of reach,

me to blame,

no one to forgive.

 

 

October 20, 2011.

 

Copyright © 2011, Ricky A. Pursley. All rights reserved.

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KathleenK
Introspective without depression about accepting where one is, but looking up.... Unexpected. Enjoyed.
KathleenL , October 23, 2011
Thanks, Kathleen
rickya
I'm glad you liked it. I am still not looking forward to Wednesday, and am trying to figure out how to uncelebrate something.
rickya , October 24, 2011
Uncelebrating
KathleenK
You will get there my dear. Uncelebrating begins by changing the meaning of that day. Not sure if you are still in that same situation, but instead of focusing on the negitives, try to find the good in tomorrow. I.E. -- the sun coming up; you still breathing; that you have another day to do more of what you love to do... write... chat with me, LOL. I write a lot about some pretty sad subjects... been a bit of hardships for me in the life I have been given... but today is a good day. Not trying to take your reality of plite away, just want you to know... YOU ARE MAKING IT THROUGH. So... change to a positive out look on what tomorrow will bring you... it will bring you another day to live -- Celebrate that ... let me know how that works out for yah. :)
KathleenL , October 25, 2011
Checking in
KathleenK
I have been thinking of you and wondering how you life is more positive? So... I am gonna ask... Rickya...how is your life more positive?
KathleenL , November 10, 2011
Not well
rickya
I hospitalized myself on Nov. 2 for recurred cellulitis. Left hospital for nursing and rehab center on Nov. 6. Still there, will be for several more days at least.
rickya , November 10, 2011
Praying for better Health
KathleenK
Oh dear. I am glad that you are keeping an eye on that. Well... do what you do well... Rest and Write!!!!! Try giving yourself a treat... go to www.CreativeCopyChallenge.com join us in the bi-weekly fun! It will help you take your mind off of your worries. There is enough... if you choose, to keep your mind off of your situation for a bit. I look forward to reading some additional submissions there too.
KathleenL , November 10, 2011

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