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21 Sep, 2011 Print PDF

The Master

KathleenK  

He is a poet with plywood, solid oak, redwood, it does not matter.

He holds up the milled wood as his apprentice says, "What are you making?"

"Time will tell," he said with a glint of gold rushing across the surface of his otherwise velvety green eyes.

The influx of cheer in his voice made the apprentice know that the winter of his own discontent would not be a road block. The apprentice was told to expect this scenario - the wood speaking to the master.

"This is where ‘experience preferred' is understated," the apprentice mused with silent excitement as he watched the craftsman study the wood.

 

(c) Kathleen L 2011

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the art will always have its own way
rickya
Beautifully done. Giving one's self over to the undercurrent often yields the most lovely work.
rickya , September 21, 2011
I've heard wood speak.
srenee
Very lovely and true. I love wood, it speaks to me all the time.(-;
srenee , September 22, 2011
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CatGem Editor
the jumbled tenses get in the way of a lovely expression -- try cleaning that up :-)
CatGem Editor , September 29, 2011
good catch, Steph
rickya
I did not notice the tense change. Now that you have mentioned it, it stops me cold.
rickya , September 30, 2011

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