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Now, legitimate.A one-eighty, if you will.
On the finger-lakes with fiberglass and thigh-high sunburns as a boy
Big-mouths below big as a cinder-block
No flies white worms simple and clean five feet down
The Ultralight shrieks bows and wobbles bobbing to the struggle
And what a fight!
Yield when he pulled pulling when he slacked
The midday sun and the yearning breath of the North calling coaxing
“Bring him in, get that gold!”
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This work has a delightful rhythm..."finger-lakes with fiberglass" fantastic!
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February 06, 2012
a literal alliteration
you really seem to enjoy the use of alliteration and might i say you use it well. i think i also enjoyed this because it brought me back to the days when i used to go fishing with my dad and sister when i was younger. thank you for that small dose of nostalgia.
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March 09, 2012
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