I really enjoyed the last three lines ("Breathless, wild/Anonymous beasts/Are everywhere"). I think these lines are far and away the most powerful in the poem.

The first seven lines, however, felt a bit confusing to me ("We met at a party...Smaller than everything,"). The first few lines present different, distinct images and I felt like at the same time that I am brought into the scene I am immediately removed from it. We go from a party to a lantern to a universe to a tunnel. The phrasing here is confusing and the imagery is distracting, partially because we have little context for these images at this point.

It would probably be a good idea to review the punctuation/capitalization. If each line were not capitalized, the poem may have a different feel to it. I am not saying this is necessarily for the better, but playing around with punctuation and capitalization may give you further ideas for revision.

I enjoy this poem a lot - characters are dynamic, emotions are changing as well. And, once again, those last three lines were wonderful.

This poem danced, like two strangers at a party A meeting of "single serving friends" as Chuck Palahniuk would have called them. That moment of deep connection that you know will never be repeated- it is very powerful. I am not sure, exactly, how two lamps are drawn together, though...?

i think the destinctions here msy need to broken into the one long sentence throws this poem off you should break allow pause