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smaddox, poetry editor

Just before the sunset behind the Bighorns-

indigo in the east and azure in the west

and a molten-flamingo pink burnout between the 

paintbrush white of every cloud-

greens slapped crazily up to that deep 

purple mountain range, once slicing 

through the floor of some ancient Sundance Sea

Just before I rise from the dinner table and walk across

the deck

and the yard

swimming in grass and thistle and wild asparagus and 

chickens, 

and your 

nephews

and here I am with your sister

she lends me her flip-flops

says something about her feet being tougher than mine

and we walk out to the road to look at that sun

set

and just before that, at the table,

I remember the way you 

smiled like 

carried that same sun on my face

and said something

that made me willing

to unbuckle fear,

as well as 

my everything- and

I’ve never enjoyed a man’s tongue

in as many places but dear

Christ

you wander

so easily.


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A gorgeous scene painted
rickya
And "said something that made me willing to unbuckle fear, as well as my everything" is masterful. The whole piece fairly made me swoon in my seat here in the very public library. This is top-notch work, and convinces me that falling in love with your talent was indeed the rightest of moves.
rickya , June 29, 2011
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smaddox, poetry editor
Thank you. I wasn't sure it was worth posting- appreciate the response.
smaddox, poetry editor , June 30, 2011
swoon as a read
70sgirl
swoon as I read.. yes.. and yes.. again. nothing more can i add to rickya's posting..
70sgirl , July 02, 2011
I love everything but..
70sgirl
the title of this ... at the moment...
70sgirl , July 02, 2011
and.. I remember the way you smiled...
70sgirl
remember the way you

smiled like

I

carried that same sun on my face

..this is the line that made me swoon.
70sgirl , July 02, 2011
Theme Park
harvey gable
You have such a way with garment un-clasping. I can't wait to see what you do with desert fauna and elastic waistbands. I seem to remember a "flamingo pink burnout" at an NHRA event in Denver a very long time ago. Probably not quite the same tho.
harvey gable , July 07, 2011
Romance displayed
danpald
A poem of love does unfold with care
Beauty set in the sunset fair
Here that beauty moves with care
From the dinner to a room most fair

The beauty of a sunset made
Alive in the midnight gaze
That is found in the beauty discovered
Slowly as love is completely uncovered
danpald , July 17, 2011

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