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24 Jul, 2011 Print PDF

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Clench

Magma is the

penultimate

friend

a two-handed

lover

a back-propped

other

 

Methane is

a pious

teacher

a stern

mother

a lofty

keeper

 

But these

outliers

 

These staggered

interests

of quasi

textual

blather

 

They pepper

with

unapproachable

swagger

and shrouded

hopes of

glass-looking

peering

 

But you

do not

require

never animate

comparisons

to the

others

 

For you

are

in form

a singularity

 

That is the

gearbox here

 

The chambers

of exponential-writhing

bulging

growth!

 

It is the

multiplicity

of valves

in finger-flecked

shape

 

But you

are no lit-low

flit of a sizzle

or transfer

in the night

 

You jab at it

you crab

and pounce

and bay

 

‘My life

is nothing

if not for the

bloom of they!’

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Bloomin' "blather"
harvey gable
Wonderful word choice Clench. Quite a breath-of-fresh-air even if one considers the ghastly effects of "methane" on sinus membrane. The speaker deftly gets his point across and then some... as it (the speakers issue) volleys across the chasm of blame and denial. Thanks!
harvey gable , July 31, 2011
Much obliged
Clench
Harvey, your critiques/comments are some of the most enjoyable on this site.
Clench , August 01, 2011
words danced across the page
AB_Riddle
I had to re-read this poem just so I could feel the rhythm again...
AB_Riddle , September 07, 2011

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